"nunkers!"

[goldenrod]

I assured him
he'd be on solid ground.
Now he finds quicksand,
Is his surround!

The last thing
I think he heard me say?
"Well, I guess it's been
That kind of day!"

goldenrod.

[Tuninks]

A good poem, just a few nit picks with the structure, but nothing too serious.

[goldenrod]

(Tuninks)

Nit-pick away!:)

goldenrod.