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goldenrod
06-04-2008, 12:25 PM
The trees, they show their new formed buds,
renewal time, encircles us.
Dormant, that which was neigh reckoned dead,
Suddenly, a new life fed.

Only cycles, well known of old,
tempers our surprise
at what we behold.
The magic, that follows
change...to warmth from cold!!

Verdancy will slowly creep,
from every place that was asleep.
Then burgeoning foliage,
at a pace,
as if't were, in a greening race!

Flowers bloom in colours bright,
a living rainbow of delight!
Thus doth spring break forth again,
for a three month season,
supreme, to reign!

goldenrod.

Sweets America
06-04-2008, 12:42 PM
I find this quite good, I like it a lot, it sounds neat. The style is interesting. Write on! :)

goldenrod
06-09-2008, 02:42 PM
(Sweets America)

Thank you "sweets", as you can no doubt infer, I am rather partial to spring!:)

goldenrod.