With You

[birgitta_nell@y]

With you I can be myself,
Something in your manner puts me at ease
And allows me to set loose
Everything that I can be…
Your crystal blue eyes lock mine
I cannot think as I slip into another world,
A heady mist shrouds my reason,
Falling away, just by being near you;
Close to you, now
I can be genuine and comfortable,
In a contented silence we can wander
Without the need for consultation.
I am happy with you,
Near you I can be alive
I am simply myself with you
With you, with you…

[goldenrod]

Sounds like the start of a beautiful relationship! Hard to come by and thus, to be treasured...

goldenrod.

[Anatoliy]

i don't like it. sounds too primitive. too short. and emotions are not that strong. it makes such impression, that the author is indifferent to what he writes. all great literature is about love and death (or some variations of those two ideas), and to be great you should write much more better than others, cause everything you have written was already written by thousands of other poets, who used the same words, the same form to express thoughts, the same similes, metaphors and other things... i'm not a good critic of poetry, but i don't like such great feelings to be expressed in such a primitive manner.

[blazeofglory]

Complete surrender. This type of pure love can be found in books of mythologies or in movies.