Welcome to the World Unbroken

[The Rider]

Welcome to the world unbroken;

Where a truth,
Carved across the desks of children and the hearts of men
Storms out of blue skies into the cavity of the mind,

A truth that does not oppose
A universe of starlight
Flickering knowingly in a night dark field.

Welcome to the world behind.
Welcome to the world ahead.
Welcome to the truth:

There's more to Life.

[Smoogles]

Epic lol.

[Sweets America]

I've read it several times and I'm not sure I understand it but I still love it, beautiful imagery.

[dibyendra]

Welcome to the world unbroken;

Where a truth,
Carved across the desks of children and the hearts of men
Storms out of blue skies into the cavity of the mind,

A truth that does not oppose
A universe of starlight
Flickering knowingly in a night dark field.

Welcome to the world behind.
Welcome to the world ahead.
Welcome to the truth:

There's more to Life.

I couldn't grasp the meaning so clear but like Sweets had explained, I loved the imagery of your poem! :thumbs_up

[The Rider]

Thank you all for the comments, I'm not really sure what that says about the poem. I'd like to say it makes it deep and meaningful, but in reality it probably means that it's crap. :)

[blazeofglory]

Can a world like this exist in material reality?

[goldenrod]

Pherhaps you are expressing a feeling, or a meaning revealed behind a sixth sense...?

goldenrod.

[The Rider]

Yes Blaze I do believe a world like this can exist. My poem is about looking beyond the factual and discovering the child like innocence in the day to day life (possibly the feeling or sixth sense goldenrod mentioned). Yet I do not believe that this is the world we currently live in and that is why I named the poem what I did. The world may be fictitious but it is definitely not unobtainable.

[dramasnot6]

I like it,not crap at all. It's a little cliche, but it's a good quality poem.
The first stanza has some great imagery,and the overall voice is strong and unique.
It's just the last stanza that is cliche,but not to a gross degree.