the moment after

[lucidnightmares]

how do we measure a moment?
in time, emotion, significance?
when does it end, where does it go?
is it a state of decadence?

is life one moment?
or comprised of many?
is everything a memory?
or is there even any?

the second it starts
it`s destined to end
the instant it`s over
another will mend

these memories will fade
this mind will go dull
and i will be left
with an empty skull

and after life has faded away
when my consciousness soars
i`ll allways have the moment
where my life met yours...

[qimissung]

I like your thoughtful pondering of the significance of a single moment in our lives.

[lucidnightmares]

thank you very much

[dibyendra]

Lucid, I liked it; it's meaning, rhyme, and it's intriguing as well.

[Parvez Ahmed]

Life is but a lie!

[kelby_lake]

Life is one long lie with a 'phhh' sound in the middle- Nina, Strange Interlude

[hoope]

life is a lie....

this is one great poem lucid..

[lucidnightmares]

wow thanks guys
i think this is an older one
really surprised that it got more responses
greatly appreciated everyone:D

[Shadow Poet]

Hey this was pretty interesting. I loved the concept.