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Psyche
12-12-2004, 07:10 AM
I do not write much poetry, in the rhyming sense...more what comes (err, spews at too rapid a rate) out of my mind.
Your comments are greeted with a smile.


Are you haunted by those stone gray walls?
The wet cement a memory of your shame.

Reality calls with its annoying chirp as I draw a skin graft, struggle to make it stick.
Our insides our wilting My Dear, an insidious plague brought on
by The Need
for The Salt
from the ocean we never visit anymore...
Almost every second, unless we simultaneously visit its parallel,
curls into memory.

All biological clocks turning to alarm mode.
We do not realize how little time these shells retain.

A lamenting hope for every individual...angst ridden, fear laden, curdled and weighed down.
Broken, the chain of DNA as a metaphor for Ego.
And then in retrospect, we are all Gods.

amuse
12-12-2004, 10:57 AM
ooh, nice :thumbs_up


an insidious plague brought on
by The Need
for The Salt
from the ocean we never visit anymore...

All biological clocks turning to alarm mode.

Broken, the chain of DNA as a metaphor for Ego.
And then in retrospect, we are all Gods.

mono
12-12-2004, 11:56 PM
I remain breathless, and without words, Psyche. Well done, and welcome to the forum, by the way.

SuicideKitten
12-15-2004, 06:18 PM
i really do love how this is done. Few things nowandays can manipulate your emotions as such.

Psyche
12-15-2004, 07:21 PM
Thank you, so much...I am a bit (lot) shy about sharing sometimes, it is usually raw and unrefined/unstructured work.
I will try to sum up the inner courage to post another one sometime. :)

SuicideKitten
12-15-2004, 07:45 PM
you definately should, sometimes the rawest emotion is what becomes most moving.
refinement is something you do over time, but just for releasing emotion that's what really matters.