...standing there.

[Tournesol]

And perhaps you will see me
One day,
Somewhere, in a crowd.
And perhaps your mind’s eye,
Heart and soul
Will recognize
My beating heart,
My throbbing soul
That longs for your
Acknowledgement,
If but once more,
At least once more.
And know
That,
While you might slightly notice me
In that crowd,
For me,
You’ll be the only one
Standing there.

14:15
March 14, 2007

[goldenrod]

Lonely wished for expectations, wistfully expressed.

goldenrod.

[Tournesol]

Thanks for your comments, goldenrod!

[dibyendra]

And perhaps you will see me
One day,
Somewhere, in a crowd.
And perhaps your mind’s eye,
Heart and soul
Will recognize
My beating heart,
My throbbing soul
That longs for your
Acknowledgement,
If but once more,
At least once more.
And know
That,
While you might slightly notice me
In that crowd,
For me,
You’ll be the only one
Standing there.

14:15
March 14, 2007

It's a heartfelt poem and it echoes my feelings of the early days. I liked this poem! :wave:

[Sweets America]

I like it too, nice feeling and sweet ending.