Hand in hand

[Taliesin]

Yesterday
I
walked through between two people
so they had to let go
of each other's hands.
When I had passed,
they smiled
and walked on,
hand in hand again.
I
walked on too.
Alone.

[Jay]

Nice :). Like it.

[mono]

Short and sweet; well done, Taliesin.

[amuse]

mm. so picturesque. beautiful yet miserable.
like the zap of

I
walked on too.
Alone.

[lacewing87]

You captured just how all adolescents feel. Reminds me of Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams". Good work!