For You My Beloved Lady..

[aggelos]

I am touching you , and i am feeling you

your hand , i am holding

do you know how much i adore you

do you know how much i love you?


My thought accompanies you

your each time

it doesn't live you alone

where you are i am being there..

[ampoule]

Your thoughts are very lovely. What woman wouldn't want her man to think this way?

[birgitta_nell@y]

This is so beautiful, well done!

[Niamh]

very...sensual. :thumbs_up

[aggelos]

thank u very much my friends..u make me very glad:yawnb:
yes, i wrote it for a woman who i loved and love..
it ''flows'' from my heart and soul..

[aggelos]

I want , a song to be written
with love from me
which everyone will sing
and it will speaks for you ..

To say how I was in love
always with you
and how happy I felt
when i existed in your life ..

To say how beautiful you were
how sweet and how tender
and that a hug from you was sufficient
to bewitch my life ..

To speak for your fresh breath
and for your silky touch
for your lifeblood kiss
and for your fabulous love

To continue to exist
for many years , for a life
to inspire and to be loved
because it speaks for a true love ...

[LePhantomeRatta]

truly lovely..

[aggelos]

thank you very much ..
in Greece where I published again these poems , in some forums , few people befooled me..
you , from the first moment-time , understood the love and the emotion that -these poems-hide ..
Thank you very, very much ..
aggelos athens greece..

[Sweets America]

I am touching you , and i am feeling you

your hand , i am holding

do you know how much i adore you

do you know how much i love you?


My thought accompanies you

your each time

it doesn't live you alone

where you are i am being there..

I am not absolutely fond of the poem even if it is very sweet and loving. I guess I would have prefered something more personal maybe, something about what in this person makes you feel this way...

Oh, you might want to replace 'live' with 'leave'. ;)

[aggelos]

thank you sweet america..
yes you have right about leave..
i am sorry for the mistake..


I am touching you , and i am feeling you

your hand , i am holding

do you know how much i adore you

do you know how much i love you?


My thought accompanies you

your each time

it doesn't leave you alone

where you are i am being there..

[aggelos]

i was very upset because of the attack from some persons in a Greek Forum ..
is so wrong , to express somebody , his feelings for a woman who he loves? :(
thank you very much for the hospitality..

[Sweets America]

i was very upset because of the attack from some persons in a Greek Forum ..
is so wrong , to express somebody , his feelings for a woman who he loves? :(
thank you very much for the hospitality..

No of course it's not wrong to express your love for a woman. :) However you'll always meet people who will not like your poetry... but in the end it's always YOUR poetry and it's ok if it does not touch everyone because for YOU, it has a meaning and you know it... and even if some people are not sensitive to it, your poems will appeal to other people like it happened here. :)

[Smoogles]

I want , a song to be written
with love from me
which everyone will sing
and it will speaks for you ..

To say how I was in love
always with you
and how happy I felt
when i existed in your life ..

To say how beautiful you were
how sweet and how tender
and that a hug from you was sufficient
to bewitch my life ..

To speak for your fresh breath
and for your silky touch
for your lifeblood kiss
and for your fabulous love

To continue to exist
for many years , for a life
to inspire and to be loved
because it speaks for a true love ...

This poem speaks to me truly... it's beautiful... it's love.

[amanda_isabel]

It lacked a little something for me.. While action was being described I would have preferred to see some of the emotion behind the action (or the desire for), suliminally or otherwise.

Still, I agree with ampoule; what woman wouldn't want to be thought of in this way?

While this particular expression did not really tickle me pink, I respect all forms of expression, and wish you the best, aggelos :)

[aggelos]

Still, I agree with ampoule; what woman wouldn't want to be thought of in this way?

While this particular expression did not really tickle me pink, I respect all forms of expression, and wish you the best, aggelos :)

thank you very much amanda-isabel

[aggelos]

This poem speaks to me truly... it's beautiful... it's love.

thank very much smoogles

[aggelos]

No of course it's not wrong to express your love for a woman. :) However you'll always meet people who will not like your poetry... but in the end it's always YOUR poetry and it's ok if it does not touch everyone because for YOU, it has a meaning and you know it... and even if some people are not sensitive to it, your poems will appeal to other people like it happened here. :)

you have absolutely right sweets america..yes the important is that it has a meaning for me and i know it..
your words present a person cultured, educated , gentle and clever.thank you very much..