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birgitta_nell@y
05-28-2008, 03:22 PM
I stood in the rain today
Thinking about dead roses.
Feeling the icy drops creep down my skin
Reminded me of being alive,
And being real, in the present.
I looked at the dead roses and sighed
Because to them the world was dark,
Life had whithered from their buds
And left them skeletons to be washed away.

PrinceMyshkin
05-30-2008, 05:03 PM
Brrr! But very nicely done! Not one syllable too many.

dibyendra
05-31-2008, 01:45 PM
Beautiful!

V.Jayalakshmi
06-04-2008, 02:19 AM
Rain and Roses.
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The rain does make the dead roses fall,

But it does make the bush grow too.

It will make the rose bush grow,

Green leaves will come again.

The buds will come waiting to open,

For who can forget those roses red?

Passion is the answer to pain of losses.