Inspired by Cdn's "Sun"

[PrinceMyshkin]

Let my love
touch you lightly
so that the only mark
it leaves
is that of my breath
on your skin.

[Sweets America]

Let my love
touch you lightly
so that the only mark
it leaves
is that of my breath
on your skin.


Yeah, that's very sweet! Very delicate, that's you!

[caelycate]

i concur - very sweet and delicate. it is clear that you used the inspiration and the theme you received from reading cdn's poem and you put your own unique twist on it and made it your own.

[CdnReader]

Let my love
touch you lightly
so that the only mark
it leaves
is that of my breath
on your skin.


Oh my. This is perfectly beautiful....and beautifully perfect.

Please excuse me while I....


* swoon *

OK. Whew. I think I can breathe again. ;)

[ampoule]

Oh my. This is perfectly beautiful....and beautifully perfect.

Please excuse me while I....


* swoon *

OK. Whew. I think I can breathe again. ;)

Well will you please help ME, Cdn??? Slap me on the back or something!!

As I have said many times....where IS my fan?

[PrinceMyshkin]

Dear Sweets, Cdn, Caely & Ampoule... thank you all very much!

[ampoule]

Let my love
touch you lightly
so that the only mark
it leaves
is that of my breath
on your skin.


and I'd like to know just what part of my skin that breath would be on....NO, don't tell me, I want to use my imagination. ;) ;)

[dibyendra]

Let my love
touch you lightly
so that the only mark
it leaves
is that of my breath
on your skin.


What a inspiration, it's beautiful indeed! :thumbs_up

[CdnReader]

Well will you please help ME, Cdn??? Slap me on the back or something!!

As I have said many times....where IS my fan?

Wait!! I'll get the smelling salts!!! :( :lol: