bliss

[CdnReader]

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bliss


caught between
flights of rainbows
and spirit's sighs

chasing handfuls of life
pulled whole from the blush of dawn,
twirling in a fragrant rose-hued breeze,
drowning in the innocence
of bliss

delicate moss yields, softly,
giving gracefully beneath my touch,
and the cool morning dew
settles on my skin,
gleaming


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[sofia82]

Good imagery

[caelycate]

i am curious to know what you were writing about. to me, it evokes the feeling of being in an isolated garden in the morning, with nothing but your thoughts for company. i especially love this part:

"delicate moss yields, softly,
giving gracefully beneath my touch,
and the cool morning dew
settles on my skin,
gleaming"

[PrinceMyshkin]

Lovely, chum! Just lovely!

[CdnReader]

Thanks, Sofia and Prince Myshkin. :)

Caely.... I don't quite know how to explain what I was thinking when i wrote it. It's about opportunities and the future and don't forget to stop and grab onto life's chances, and at the same time it's also important to relax and enjoy it all. Probably doesn't make much sense to anybody but me. LOL.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Thanks, Sofia and Prince Myshkin. :)

Caely.... I don't quite know how to explain what I was thinking when i wrote it. It's about opportunities and the future and don't forget to stop and grab onto life's chances, and at the same time it's also important to relax and enjoy it all. Probably doesn't make much sense to anybody but me. LOL.

Surely none of our poems makes quite as much sense - or is as precious - to anybody else as to we who wrote it?

[CdnReader]

So true, Jer. I always feel uncomfortable trying to explain my poetry. It's made up of layers upon layers of truth and lies, thoughts and philosophies, creativity and junk, dreams and nightmares, mindless wanderings and focused ideas. There's no way to separate it all and make sense of it in a sentence or two.

Maybe that's why it's poetry. Because it's impossible to explain any other way. :lol:

[ampoule]

Enigmas-R-Us.

Simply bliss!

[amanda_isabel]

chasing handfuls of life
pulled whole from the blush of dawn,

loved this part, and as always, i loved it Cdn.

cheers, Ampoule: Enigmas-R-Us!

xoxo
amanda

[CdnReader]

Thanks, Amp and Amanda. :D