Sad Soul

[Luc1977]

Sad Soul

All nigths,
her record returns to me;
she has gone,
in the mist of the halfnight,
and she shall never come back.
The blue angel of the darkness
took her far away,
to a claudy land,
just between heaven and earth:
the limbo;
where they go
who decide to kill themselves.
And I am here,
praying to the Lord:
Forgive,please;
her sad soul deserves forgiveness.

By Luciano Doti

[Luc1977]

Absent

Alone
In the dreaming night
Only your image
In the empty chamber
Dancing between shadowns
On my minds
But not your body
Unteneable far body
Absent
Far away of here.

Luciano Doti.

[goldenrod]

I like the atmosphere and the sentiment of both poems. I gather that English is not your first language, there being several mistakes in spelling?

goldenrod.