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Adolescent09
05-22-2008, 06:15 PM
Twilight Dusk

An earth of browning shadow
beneath starry skies
is covered in violet mallow
where subtle beauty cries

Blue are those withered buds
when bipeds go away,
dead stems sprout to life from mud,
hence the beginning of the dying day,

the chirps of the feathered breasts abate
in a land so still and great
where the soft fruit begins to husk
under the spell of the twilight dusk
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Howdy folks.

ampoule
05-22-2008, 09:52 PM
Hello!! Nice to 'see' you and even nicer to read one of your very nice poems.

Il Penseroso
05-22-2008, 11:20 PM
nice to see you back adol!

very nice poem, a definite change in style. I especially like that first line and the closing couplet.

Hope you stick around to post a few more