Falling

[Beautifull]

the thrill of the wild pounding in your chest,
of having your head filled with daydreams,
to see that someone special everyday,
with anticipation of the next day,

"oh what will he think?"
"oh what will she think?"
you don't know what to think when they're here,
but perfectly clear when they disappear...

what will you do when you can't stop,
when all your mind is filled with is images?
when you finally realize that you are falling...



SOMETHING AT THE SPUR OF THE MOMENT...

[Trystan]

I like it.

Edit: just to elaborate as I know how annoying it could be for to get really concise replies.

I take it that it is about "falling in love"? I think that it captures that feeling very well . . . and also, the anxiety and being nervous around someone. I don't think I've ever really fallen in love when so I might be a little out of touch, lol. But I think I can relate.

[Beautifull]

thank you!

maybe this doesn't apply to everyone, but the shy ones...i think you know what i'm talking about though...even though you've never fell in love...
thanks for the comment though...:)

[Beautifull]

hey people this is new! check it out!

[Beautifull]

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[mukta581]

Broken hearts, love's deceit,
pieces fall down to my feet.
Broken promises, love's a lie,
puddles form from tears I cry.
Broken dreams, love's illusion,
sorrowed cause of your intrusion.
Broken hope, love's a game,
doesn't last, ends the same.
Broken sleep, love's the cause,
digs at me with sharpened claws.
Broken spirit, love of sorrow,
stolen now is my tomorrow.
Broken life, love is lost,
Broken now and that's the cost.

[Beautifull]

that is beautifull,
you are really good at rhyming...

[blazeofglory]

the thrill of the wild pounding in your chest,
of having your head filled with daydreams,
to see that someone special everyday,
with anticipation of the next day,

"oh what will he think?"
"oh what will she think?"
you don't know what to think when they're here,
but perfectly clear when they disappear...

what will you do when you can't stop,
when all your mind is filled with is images?
when you finally realize that you are falling...



SOMETHING AT THE SPUR OF THE MOMENT...

Beautiful, rhythmic and what not?

[Beautifull]

thank you.