New one

[1988]

Hello all, I am new here. This is the 3rd poem I have ever written. For the record I am 20 years old and attend college. Blah blah thats about it. This is just something that came to mind.

Bleed
It runs through my veins, like water down a stream
It goes on its course without end
A cut happens and it flows out
You are bleeding to just know you are alive
The mind focuses on the cut and away from the hurt
To bleed is to release the pain
But the cut will heal and the pain will flow again
Through the body until the next cut


and for better spirits here is the first poem I ever wrote

Jim Carrey is a funny man
when he was young he lived in a van
his movies made him soar high
except the movie, the cable guy

[lucidnightmares]

your first poem is a cute thought

your third is dark and pondering, enjoyed it.
to me a poem question something or state something.
an idea.

it got me thinking, and for that i thank you

[blazeofglory]

Hello all, I am new here. This is the 3rd poem I have ever written. For the record I am 20 years old and attend college. Blah blah thats about it. This is just something that came to mind.

Bleed
It runs through my veins, like water down a stream
It goes on its course without end
A cut happens and it flows out
You are bleeding to just know you are alive
The mind focuses on the cut and away from the hurt
To bleed is to release the pain
But the cut will heal and the pain will flow again
Through the body until the next cut


and for better spirits here is the first poem I ever wrote

Jim Carrey is a funny man
when he was young he lived in a van
his movies made him soar high
except the movie, the cable guy

interesting and penetrating.