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PrinceMyshkin
05-18-2008, 04:17 PM
If only I’d known you a little bit longer.
If only I’d loved you a little bit better.
If only I’d met you some other June,
in some other country,
wearing some other skirt
or some other blouse.
If only I’d held you a little bit closer
or loved you a whole lot better.
If only I hadn’t hungered for Thai
when you wanted Mexican.
If only it hadn’t rained that night.

CdnReader
05-18-2008, 04:21 PM
:bawling:

P.S. You were SOOO right about that line. :)

PrinceMyshkin
05-18-2008, 04:53 PM
:bawling:

Hope those tears didn't short-out your keyboard!


P.S. You were SOOO right about that line. :)

You may use this poem asyou proposed....

blazeofglory
05-21-2008, 11:56 AM
If only I’d known you a little bit longer.
If only I’d loved you a little bit better.
If only I’d met you some other June,
in some other country,
wearing some other skirt
or some other blouse.
If only I’d held you a little bit closer
or loved you a whole lot better.
If only I hadn’t hungered for Thai
when you wanted Mexican.
If only it hadn’t rained that night.


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