Destiny

[tinaavis]

Come hither to my call I cry
For I am the wolf
That lays at your door
Do not touch me
Or let me in
For I hold your future from within
Your destiny is shaped
By actions to be
While upon this mortal earth
Tread thy path with even keel
From me no deed you will conceal
In my breath and in my words
I will be your pathfinder
And your guide
For I alone can lead thyself
Through the great divide.

No reproduction without permission Copyright Tina Avis 2007

[tinaavis]

The stars twinkle in the night sky like they want to kiss you
The moonlight illuminates thy face
Casting a soft shadowy spell on all that gaze your image
And many a men’s heart begins to race
With Divine beauty bestowed upon thee
Just like the stars and moon thou are truly a heavenly body
To steal just one kiss from thy tender lips
Would surely cast those gates to heaven open wide?
For thou art thy love eternal


No reproduction without permission Copyright Tina Avis 2008

[blazeofglory]

Come hither to my call I cry
For I am the wolf
That lays at your door
Do not touch me
Or let me in
For I hold your future from within
Your destiny is shaped
By actions to be
While upon this mortal earth
Tread thy path with even keel
From me no deed you will conceal
In my breath and in my words
I will be your pathfinder
And your guide
For I alone can lead thyself
Through the great divide.

No reproduction without permission Copyright Tina Avis 2007

your poem soothingly tries to drive away someone, but there is something that sticks and hooks someone to it.

[amanda_isabel]

hmm.. about the first poem-- i think the use of "thy" in the 10th line is out of place (especially since "you" was used in all the other lines)?

the same goes for the secod poem--i found the inconsistent use between "thy", "thee" with "you", etc., a little out of place.

well anyway overall i liked them :)