the lakes

[Ceahorse]

The lakes

It was enticingly alive.
It showed the notice;
But hid any message.

He went elsewhere,
But soon returned;
He hid his desire to swim

It seemed to wait

He dropped the rock on the surface of the lake
He can swim, but the water isn’t of his taste.
He convinced himself it has a unique flavour.

Which side of the lake to swim?

The dark side is open, inviting, and warm.
The light side is reserved, challenging, and cool.

He has two toes, so dips into each.
They are both inviting.

[Jay]

It's another form of expressing good/evil (at least I got it that way) I haven't read before, I like the originality of the idea (lake idea) :), I like it :nod:

[Ceahorse]

i see how you see what you see jay,, but im must say sorry there is no good and evil,well thats not what i was thinking when i wrote it.. but thanks for the reply.

[Jay]

:) kinda can't see why that could we wrong, me seeing something else, not like everyone is going to see it the way I do... see my point? (I sure like the word 'see'...)
It was my first impression :), sorry if you were hoping for something else.