the splendor of moments

[lucidnightmares]

your hope is shining gloriously
every moment reflected beautifully

as all good things find an end
you`ll find that wounds may never mend

reveled in the action of waiting
left you alone as the world is hating

the sun seems to go cold
and all you want is the times of old

so long ago, seems only yesterday
not that it matters anyway

now watch your hope shatter in the evening sun
every moment glistens as it returns from where it begun

[blazeofglory]

your hope is shining gloriously
every moment reflected beautifully

as all good things find an end
you`ll find that wounds may never mend

reveled in the action of waiting
left you alone as the world is hating

the sun seems to go cold
and all you want is the times of old

so long ago, seems only yesterday
not that it matters anyway

now watch your hope shatter in the evening sun
every moment glistens as it returns from where it begun

Beautifully rhymed but not at the expense of beauty and meaning.

[lucidnightmares]

your words are very kind and i thank you for them.