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suziemb
05-13-2008, 09:55 PM
This is a poem that I wrote about my niece.


My Angel Without Wings

Since you were born, you have been an angel to me
A sweet little angel without wings is what I see

So innocent and filled with a love that is so pure
You make everyday of my life easier to endure

I look into your angelic face with that infectious smile
And can’t help but get lost in your eyes for a while

You give me a glimpse of what heaven is all about
Pure love and an innocence that knows no doubt

B-Mental
05-14-2008, 05:45 AM
Its very good Suzie. Unfortunately, I know your niece, and the poem is load of beetle poo. Just kidding. Its good to see you are posting more of your poems. Offshore sux. Pete.

ampoule
05-14-2008, 07:52 AM
Your poem is also innocent and filled with love, just like your sweet niece.

Ahera
05-14-2008, 12:36 PM
Nice sweet lil poem.

Pendragon
05-17-2008, 10:57 AM
Sweet, simple poetry! http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l108/AbsalomKane/Smilies/Bravo.gif

blazeofglory
05-17-2008, 12:25 PM
This is a poem that I wrote about my niece.


My Angel Without Wings

Since you were born, you have been an angel to me
A sweet little angel without wings is what I see

So innocent and filled with a love that is so pure
You make everyday of my life easier to endure

I look into your angelic face with that infectious smile
And can’t help but get lost in your eyes for a while

You give me a glimpse of what heaven is all about
Pure love and an innocence that knows no doubt
I am sad at the fact, for I have predilection for seeings things at their other end. Everyone is born so pure, seamless and innocent, but we become infected with time.

Is not this the tragedy of life?