The Curse Of Hunger

[Mar_Moh]

new day old rain!

new music old pain!

new sight old light!

I must hold my heart tight,

you may wonder why I stare
to your face with all this care

a man on a cross
bleeding a bless

inside your eyes I die
waiting your touch for resurrection

you just came too late
after I read my fate

I am cursed to my bones
with hunger never end

You have all the tools
that can down my cross

But you can't see the gate
where you have to cross

And I cannot show you the way
or even ask you to stay

while I am tied too hard
surrounded with many guards

You can just smile and say
you met a cursed man today

hungry to your beauty
breathing its ray!!

[dibyendra]

Very touching poem and the ending of this poem is intriguing!



inside your eyes I die
waiting your touch for resurrection




hungry to your beauty
breathing its ray!!


Great! :thumbs_up

[Mar_Moh]

Thank you for your review.
I really tried to use the language as much as I could because English is not my native language but I realized that language sometimes is a carrier which can still perform even it is not perfectly made if the passenger loves the trip!
have good day!

[Xcape]

I love this poem