all i have to say...

[kelby_lake]

All I have to say
I write in six short lines:
Never love me, never leave me
May your blind love not decieve me
These emotions just a craze
The echoes of archaic ways
If I should call you my honey, my baby
Vow or run- love's not a maybe

[firefangled]

All I have to say
I write in six short lines:
Never love me, never leave me
May your blind love not decieve me
These emotions just a craze
The echoes of archaic ways
If I should call you my honey, my baby
Vow or run- love's not a maybe

This reminds me of Edna St. Vincent Millay. Very effective and well written.

[dibyendra]

May I say everything about this poem in one line?
It's lovely!

[blazeofglory]

All I have to say
I write in six short lines:
Never love me, never leave me
May your blind love not decieve me
These emotions just a craze
The echoes of archaic ways
If I should call you my honey, my baby
Vow or run- love's not a maybe

Do you mean emotions are the echoes of archaic ways?
No, I as a reader am critical of this point.
Emotions are the real stuffs

Yet the poem is beautifully written.