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DanBierce
10-11-2009, 12:05 PM
sun through fog

youth's moon

is easy

alakungfu
10-16-2009, 01:21 PM
define an image
in bygone pigment and semblance

Wade-newb
10-24-2009, 03:13 AM
Desolation.
Ravages the souls.
Of those long lost.

Dark Muse
11-04-2009, 03:45 AM
Your voice
howls
through
distant nights
tormenting me

alakungfu
11-10-2009, 08:13 PM
Credo


Don't take chances

but,

give everyone a chance.

Granny5
11-12-2009, 07:08 AM
I peek
again and again
you're not here

Dark Muse
11-17-2009, 11:31 PM
Glass
lips
speak posion
lies

soft fallen
snow

alakungfu
11-19-2009, 03:13 PM
What is irony, what
among the simplest regrets?

alakungfu
11-19-2009, 06:20 PM
clasped lips
moan-
-weakly
of-
-groaning, grimacing time

alakungfu
12-15-2009, 03:25 PM
In a perfect world
What replaces fear?
Anger.

hack
12-19-2009, 04:41 PM
a single thought
polished smooth
by blowing sand

mazHur
12-19-2009, 04:47 PM
Sand blasted
minds
rarely someone
finds.
I didn't.

hack
12-22-2009, 02:43 PM
Under where?
Under there.
Oh, underwear!

mazHur
12-22-2009, 03:15 PM
Oh, underwear!
Thy stench
makes me
feel her!

Dark Muse
01-10-2010, 01:44 AM
I see bluebirds
in the sky
like clouds

lillottezobel
01-12-2010, 01:10 PM
I'll try
to comment
on that.

nightshifft
01-14-2010, 01:42 AM
cold and coiled
snake like awaited
my fate

nightshifft
01-14-2010, 01:42 AM
shadows grow
dark in loves lonely
forsaken heart

nightshifft
01-14-2010, 01:56 AM
shadows grow
dark in loves lonely
forsaken heart

kafkaroach
01-14-2010, 02:56 AM
the sun descends
stagnant rays paint
bleeding clouds

tailor STATELY
01-16-2010, 07:38 AM
My Lady

Green-eyed
beauty mine
my love
my life

hack
02-04-2010, 04:32 PM
night fell
with the snow
softly
touching earth

Dark Muse
03-18-2010, 12:28 AM
My lips burn
with the
taste of you

Babyguile
03-24-2010, 09:35 PM
Old woman waters,
watching -
the young tulips grow.

Dark Muse
05-03-2010, 01:16 AM
Darkness consumes me
erodes my soul
I smile

hillwalker
05-03-2010, 06:04 AM
Black winter sky
whispers summer sun
to itself

dizzydoll
05-03-2010, 06:55 AM
Its our Sun
we allow you
to borrow it.

Dark Muse
05-17-2010, 12:07 AM
If I am flotsam
you are surely jetsam

Babyguile
05-17-2010, 08:29 AM
Darkness consumes me
erodes my soul
I smile

I love this one.

Dark Muse
05-17-2010, 12:41 PM
Thank you!

munkinhead
08-04-2010, 07:52 PM
red peonys
torn and broken
by spring sleet

mazHur
08-04-2010, 08:11 PM
storm
hurricane
cyclone
tidal wave
versus Life alone!!

Jerrybaldy
08-05-2010, 06:51 PM
There is something
I must say
right now.

mazHur
08-05-2010, 07:42 PM
I
don't
know
what
is
on
your
mind?

munkinhead
08-05-2010, 10:55 PM
far Apophis
at apihelion
turns on its heel

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 02:00 PM
I am just about
to tell
you
mazHur

mazHur
08-06-2010, 02:48 PM
I am just about
to tell
you
mazHur

Please
hasten
as the night is
getting over!

http://images.iop.org/objects/phw/world/23/8/37/fin1.jpg

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 05:42 PM
now you
have distracted me
with your
picture

dafydd manton
08-06-2010, 05:56 PM
Are you sure
That you're
Wired up properly?

mazHur
08-06-2010, 05:58 PM
Is not a picture
worth a thousand
words??

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 05:58 PM
the positive
is clearly on the
negative wire

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 05:59 PM
mazHur
that picture looks
lots like
Alice Cooper

mazHur
08-06-2010, 05:59 PM
short circuiting
will rapidly drain
down the battery!!

Delta40
08-06-2010, 06:01 PM
I saw
Alice cooper
perform live
on stage

dafydd manton
08-06-2010, 06:05 PM
Alice Cooper
Was really super
Bar
The mascara

Delta40
08-06-2010, 06:11 PM
cool when we're young
age makes us ridiculous

mazHur
08-06-2010, 06:15 PM
mazHur
that picture looks
lots like
Alice Cooper

To me
it looks
Josephine Baker
Banana Dancing!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G1tVgzMy5dY&feature=player_embedded

mazHur
08-06-2010, 06:16 PM
cool when we're young
age makes us ridiculous

age's just a number
feel younger
keep cool!:)

Delta40
08-06-2010, 06:23 PM
lol is one word
you are definitely right!

dafydd manton
08-06-2010, 06:31 PM
Age.
Getting stiff in the joints.
No problem.

Delta40
08-06-2010, 06:37 PM
age like L'Oreal woman
because you're worth it

mazHur
08-06-2010, 07:08 PM
with age comes wisdom
wisdom that nobody understands.

Jerrybaldy
08-06-2010, 07:57 PM
is that what
now accounts
for our
entertainment

snowdrop17
08-12-2010, 02:50 PM
Searching paradise on earth...
Can we ever find?

mazHur
08-12-2010, 03:09 PM
the way to paradise
passes through life's hell!

aliengirl
08-13-2010, 03:05 PM
If life becomes hell,
is it worth living?

mazHur
08-13-2010, 03:16 PM
If life becomes hell,
is it worth living?

Why not?
Hell's also a shelter
for humans!

aliengirl
08-15-2010, 12:51 PM
But who are we?
A crowd of hollowmen.

mazHur
08-15-2010, 07:39 PM
But who are we?
A crowd of hollowmen.

Unless we know ourselves
We cannot know God?

aliengirl
08-18-2010, 02:16 PM
Can hours of meditation reveal
Our true identity?

tailor STATELY
08-21-2010, 12:28 AM
Epitaph:
He brought
A pen to
A gunfight

© tailor STATELY
8/20/2010

lacadalet_
08-25-2010, 01:32 PM
"Cup of red,"
she waits and
cows are milked
than drop

aliengirl
08-25-2010, 02:28 PM
Epitaph:
He brought
A pen to
A gunfight

© tailor STATELY
8/20/2010

A complete story in just eight words. Superb!

AdoreroDio
08-26-2010, 07:54 PM
a passionate embrace
a step, swing

dancing lessons

lacadalet_
08-28-2010, 01:43 AM
a passionate embrace
a step, swing

dancing lessons

sounds and steps in one short second
awesome

Delta40
08-28-2010, 02:14 AM
worlds apart
in the same home
they lived

Bar22do
08-28-2010, 05:57 AM
Epitaph:
He brought
A pen to
A gunfight

© tailor STATELY
8/20/2010

This is so efficient, tS, succinct and poignantly telling it all (and more!). So fine.

miyako73
08-30-2010, 02:56 AM
His hand
Tight on my chin,
I swim.

tailor STATELY
09-03-2010, 03:20 AM
Thank you for your kind remarks aliengirl & Bar22do.

Sincerely,
tailor STATELY

mazHur
09-03-2010, 05:53 AM
Love
is
a serious
business
take
it seriously.

aliengirl
09-05-2010, 02:13 PM
Love
is
a serious
business
take
it seriously.

Thanks
for the advice.
Will surely
follow it.

mazHur
09-05-2010, 02:47 PM
Thanks
for the advice.
Will surely
follow it.

please
make haste
as you live
only once:)

aliengirl
09-23-2010, 03:36 PM
Silence is my answer,
To your unkind behavior.

hillwalker
09-23-2010, 04:44 PM
dumbfounded
the moment her feet
left the ground

Silas Thorne
09-23-2010, 04:47 PM
aggressive duck
crosses road alone slowly
stopping cars

mazHur
09-23-2010, 06:21 PM
Silence is my answer,
To your unkind behavior.

Did my words
hurt you?
Burn my tongue:)

aliengirl
09-30-2010, 02:23 PM
Did my words
hurt you?
Burn my tongue:)

Not at all my dear,

We're good friends. :)

aliengirl
09-30-2010, 02:27 PM
When night spreads its dark wings,

You're missed.

mazHur
09-30-2010, 02:38 PM
When night spreads its dark wings,

You're missed.



Hi!


If you miss me
there is something
esoteric:)

mazHur
09-30-2010, 02:40 PM
Not at all my dear,

We're good friends. :)

merci beaucoup!
Indeed we are
good friends forever !:)

Dark Muse
10-15-2010, 01:14 PM
I have half-dreams
in the crescent light

MarkBastable
10-17-2010, 05:41 AM
I felt that we should have an eight-word poem that rhymes, and so I'd like to offer this freshly-minted work entitled Never Marry a Sax Player or a Hooker.

You blow
Although
You know
I'll go.

iamnobody
10-17-2010, 12:02 PM
Coward
or an hypocrite
either way
still..Broken

aliengirl
11-06-2010, 02:28 PM
I asked my mirror,
Who am I?
"Reflection."

mazHur
11-06-2010, 03:52 PM
I asked my mirror,
Who am I?
"Reflection."

:)

I asked my mirror,
who am i
'Nothing'!

solaris
11-08-2010, 06:53 PM
eight words
are still seven too many

jajdude
11-11-2010, 02:03 AM
Fish see fishermen and think
Damn, them again.

Dark Muse
08-26-2011, 01:31 AM
Your words
have the power
to melt me

mazHur
08-26-2011, 01:48 AM
A little warmth
makes hearts melt
like chocolate.

Silas Thorne
08-26-2011, 02:38 AM
Quickly hide that piece, Niece,
it's the police!

IceM
08-26-2011, 02:54 AM
Like dew pearlings at dawn,
your smile shines.

Silas Thorne
08-26-2011, 03:04 AM
She smiles, my trumpet rises,
the curtains close. ;)

aliengirl
09-27-2011, 11:12 AM
Clouds part,
sun shines,
as a child smiles.

mazHur
09-27-2011, 04:35 PM
Desire
is a serpent
befriending only
weak hearts.

Delta40
09-27-2011, 06:10 PM
Pity
weeps tears
on its self-absorbed sleeve

mazHur
09-27-2011, 06:43 PM
Where's the world going??
Don't know for sure.

qimissung
10-17-2011, 05:23 PM
Supple leaf leached of love, brittle dying thing

mazHur
11-19-2011, 01:25 PM
A caged bird
struggles to fly
when released.

YesNo
11-19-2011, 02:23 PM
Furry, hairy,
Funny, scary,
Monster meanies
Making merry.

mazHur
11-19-2011, 04:58 PM
Left Right
Left right
Watch steps
Double March

YesNo
11-20-2011, 07:09 AM
Santa, crimson bright,
Drives his reindeer sleigh tonight.

mazHur
11-20-2011, 08:12 AM
Hurry up
It's time to go
but where??

DieterM
11-20-2011, 08:53 AM
In time,
minutes will pass by,
I guess

mazHur
11-20-2011, 11:38 AM
Time
Is the healer
Time is the killer.....

YesNo
11-21-2011, 10:21 AM
Why hesitate?
Tomorrow's now may be too late.

qimissung
11-21-2011, 07:44 PM
let ease ease back into your life...ahhhh

qimissung
11-21-2011, 07:47 PM
time's rule leads to a life lived timorously.

mazHur
11-22-2011, 02:48 AM
Who can see
with eyes blind?
Bats only.

Pensive
11-22-2011, 01:16 PM
Empty eyes speak sadly
Bowed heads listen not

mazHur
11-22-2011, 05:27 PM
Raise up
your head
look into
my eyes.

qimissung
11-24-2011, 03:14 AM
see the loving kindness
waiting there for you

mazHur
11-24-2011, 04:19 AM
Traffic is slow
Have the gas prices
risen?

Varenne Rodin
11-24-2011, 04:43 AM
In corporeal sufferance
all beings
will feel pain

mazHur
11-24-2011, 05:39 AM
Alleviate pain
Put spirit
in your corporeal abode.

sadhana
11-24-2011, 05:50 AM
wind blows
who knows where
city in sighs.

mazHur
11-24-2011, 05:55 AM
Thundering clouds
torrential rains
Heart longing
for you.

YesNo
11-24-2011, 12:07 PM
Weather wonder--
Pounding thunder--
Rainfalls start:
Angry heart.

qimissung
11-24-2011, 03:00 PM
the rounded drop of rain holds all things

mazHur
11-24-2011, 03:14 PM
mamma cooking
papa looking
hunger strikes
Dip van Dyke!!

YesNo
Weather wonder--
Pounding thunder--
Rainfalls start:
Angry heart.

qimissung
11-24-2011, 06:48 PM
giving thanks
the roof leaks
my heart drips

mazHur
11-24-2011, 06:54 PM
Sky is my roof
Earth is my bed

cafolini
11-24-2011, 07:02 PM
hocus pocus
circling locus
human medicine
babbling focus

mazHur
11-24-2011, 07:04 PM
Unter munter
gull gulunter
Hum dono
Khur khurunter!

qimissung
11-24-2011, 07:47 PM
the smell of earth and worms,
freshly turned

cacian
11-25-2011, 07:27 AM
solemn spoken truth
reveal yourself!! do tell all!

Dark Muse
11-27-2011, 11:11 PM
Dangling
upon the edge
of your poisoned
lips.

cacian
11-28-2011, 06:28 AM
outer space
stars shine
passage
of
time ahead!

tailor STATELY
03-21-2012, 01:41 AM
Nice one cacain !

A found poem (I think) that I chanced upon: https://www.google.com/search?client=opera&rls=en&q=%22white+is+the+achromatic+color+of+maximum+ligh tness%22&sourceid=opera&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&channel=suggest


White is the
achromatic colour
of
maximum lightness

Might just use this as an idea to expound upon...

And here is the page it's on http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1125603#post1125603

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

cacian
03-21-2012, 04:26 AM
traverse
reverse
tis walk of life
ahead again!

Dark Muse
06-25-2013, 10:13 PM
Your eyes
are storm gray
they awaken me.

tailor STATELY
09-06-2013, 02:47 AM
Rejoice!
There's joy in
the refining
greater than gold

9/5/2013

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Dark Muse
11-16-2014, 11:32 PM
Wisteria perfume
~lingers~
I think only your
~hair~

Pompey Bum
11-17-2014, 11:27 AM
Pity the porcupines:
Pink snouts pierced
With spines.

Pompey Bum
11-17-2014, 12:04 PM
Catharsis, catharsis!
It's the way of all arses.

axolotl
02-19-2015, 05:33 PM
maybe my fly
of words
it is mayfly

tailor STATELY
03-15-2022, 04:22 PM
Who's first to blink
What's next
Second base

Danik 2016
03-16-2022, 06:34 AM
Luminous lights
sheltering
dark shadows-
corners of
conscience

tailor STATELY
03-16-2022, 03:02 PM
listening for the

oboe
in the woodwind

forest