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JTParreira
04-26-2008, 08:56 AM
The last call for flight, good bye
and the kisses
words dying in the lips
compressed lips
against lips a time more,
a last time,
before entering in blue.
J.T.Parreira
blazeofglory
04-26-2008, 09:30 AM
The last call for flight, good bye
and the kisses
words dying in the lips
compressed lips
against lips a time more,
a last time,
before entering in blue.
J.T.Parreira
A lot of meanings are compressed within a few words in your poem. Marvelously written. I got moved.
white camellia
04-27-2008, 02:20 AM
Does "farewell" mean that the departing is forever, or the speaker, by saying it, imply that they won't see each other again?
firefangled
04-27-2008, 10:55 AM
Does "farewell" mean that the departing is forever, or the speaker, by saying it, imply that they won't see each other again?
I wondered this as well...because of the color blue. Sky...?
For me I would rather wonder...
white camellia
04-27-2008, 11:11 AM
For me I would rather wonder...
Maybe that's the best to do.
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