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lucidnightmares
04-20-2008, 12:29 AM
I wrote this one rather late for something to occupy myself with.
alittle rushed and full of ramblings.


so silently stares the moon
into my minds desires
the eye is blinded by hope
and the feeling numbed by doubt
darkness is nice, for contrast is needed
if we are to see lights beauty

we all have light
hidden away
we all have darkness
locked inside
so let it out
let contrast beget beauty

embrace your shadow
caress your light
smile at nothing
and release your sorrows for the world to desperse
pain is necessary for pleasure to be
share your burdens and accept the warmth
this world knows nothing
for we create it everyday
so create your world as you create yourself
blend yours and mine into euphoria

blazeofglory
04-20-2008, 09:12 PM
I this world knows nothing
for we create it everyday
so create your world as you create yourself
blend yours and mine into euphoria

I like this very much. With this a new truth revealed to me.

I too feel deeply that this world is empty and blank canvas on which we portray our imaginations.

You presented a great vision, and proved that a poet is a visionary.;

lucidnightmares
04-20-2008, 11:23 PM
your words are kind, and for that I give you thanks.
Your ideas are brilliant, and for that I give you praise.
hopefuly we will create worlds worthy of humanity.