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blazeofglory
04-16-2008, 09:53 PM
Am I the way I write?

This I can not say at all that writings speaks much of the person one is, for writing can not express much of what goes on within us.

Man in fact is a queer creature with a varied layered mind. He deceives himself pretty often.

I do not speak everything I think. I am at liberty to think the way I choose. But I can not speak the way I think. My conscious mind censures all that I want to speak.
Our writings do not represent us fully.

We may have many pretexts or pretensions.

We think funnily and see funny dreams. Our civilization disapproves and denunciates things we think.

We are conditioned to speak the way the society we live in expect from us.
The real self gets liquidated in the process.

We are embargoed to respond to external stimuli the way we choose primordially.

We are caged and there are iron bars around our mental chambers.

There are too many walls and we are too weak to break free.

Do not expect I am honest or any writer for that matter honest to what he or she writes and most of them are pretensions flow out of vain glories and nothing else.

I am not the way I write.
My writing is the fabrics of my imagination and I am the stuff concrete in the make.

zuozuo
04-17-2008, 12:45 AM
I like the way what you so called not the way you write.IMHO,i rather than think that i am just a so call "poet",the outside world owe our a lots.what should we do is just meditation in our own world.
Just a whiny words,excuse.

ampoule
04-17-2008, 07:49 AM
You are right Blaze. I do believe we censor ourselves and then we turn around and censure ourselves for it. "They" say 'you are what you eat...say...live...'. Well, I also think we are what we write but still guarded. I think I want to think about this today.
Thank you for these thoughts, Blaze. :)

symphony
04-17-2008, 09:18 AM
you reminded me of this topic that i read many months back from now:
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=27891

and once again i find myself thinking...

Auriga
04-18-2008, 12:50 PM
I agree that that we censor the words that come out on paper which are representations of the thoughts that we have, but I woudn't say that we censor the thoughts that we have in our heads. I do not believe those are capable of being censored. We might dis-regard some thoughts becuase we believe that society holds certain taboos towards them, but that does not mean that the thoughts do not occur. Also, society does not tell us what we are allowed to think, the thoughts we have dictate the societies we live in.

Very nicely written poem, though. I really like the way you write. You do not rely on the imgarery of your words to get your point across, you write in simple terms to get the full meaning of your words across. Keep it up, I enjoy your thoughts as they give me and, I would pressume others on this board, things to think about as we go about our daily routines.