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Red_Rose
04-12-2008, 05:32 PM
Torn
Torn on the Inside,
Torn on the Outside,
Love is such a hard thing.
Only one girl,
And more than one guy,
Only one Heart that needs to be Filled.
Elated to be so Popular and Loved.
Buy Kills not knowing who to choice.
One girl,
Too many guys,
One heart Undecided.
The only thing this girl wants,
Is to find Love and Happiness.
And that girl
Is
Torn

firefangled
04-13-2008, 09:27 AM
I'm always a sucker to open a poem that reminds me of Natalie Imbruglia's Torn:


“Illusion never changed
into something real,
I’m wide awake and I can see
the perfect sky is torn,
you’re a little late, I’m already torn.”


I can appreciate the sentiment here. My 17 yo daughter goes through the same throes from time to time.

I tell her to go out with both (NO!, separately). The one who wants to possess you? Dump him.

Red_Rose
06-20-2008, 07:08 PM
Thank you for the comment firefangled. It is good to know that i am not the only one