Getting Rid Of The Itch

[mazHur]

Getting Rid Of The Itch
(adapted)
by mazHur

First Voice::

Charm? Noooooo.!
Trained?? Noooooooooo !
Hubby can best struggle ,
strive to achieve addiction with the other half;
problems are then solved mostly,
and the struggle diminishes.
Just the minor matter of 30 or so years you see??
how can begum be trained to dote on hubby
while being in London on such a
short sojourn?
surely Ox street and Old Professor and libraries beckon.
pure 'salty and peppery'' charm i suspect.

Second Voice::

i wish most married men would follow
their 7-yr itch to its logical conclusion --
life would be so spicy.

The Bard:




,,,,,,but what would I do ?

I got a six and a half only !

Second Voice::

,,,,,,,,scratch yourself for 6 months to begin with..........


First Voice::

The itch dies rapidly
in a buzz light year
with one look at the trusting, unadulteratedly
loving faces of the children....

The Bard:::

Your words, friend , touched my heart but,,,,,

what would you do to kill the itch if----
you find your child or children's faces
smeared with blood-thirsty dragon's blood
in front of you
with YOU, hand-to-foot bound?
My friends, this life ain't not so simple,
no joke please....
Look at life in the eyes !!
*******

[PrinceMyshkin]

This is surely one of the strangest things ever posted here, Mazhur. Frankly, I couldn't make head nor tail of it.

[mazHur]

This is surely one of the strangest things ever posted here, Mazhur. Frankly, I couldn't make head nor tail of it.

Dear Prince

thanks your precious comments which I deeply appreciate.
Yes, this is the first time I attempted to write this kind of poem reflecting the attitudes of different people towards life ; the way they enjoy this world in their respective worlds and circumstances; the complacency of one, the easy-going outlook of the other and the sad state of bard's circumstances. The poem tries to reflect sentiments, feelings, outlook, views, evaluation and fortunate and unfortunate situations of people at the same time , in the same space and the same world...and above all when they all are old friends ! I was shook by this disparity of human nature and understanding and how it reflects and in some cases tries to impose its conclusions on others,,,,right or wrong. And, I think this is the cause of ALL the troubles or itches in this world !!

cheers!

[blazeofglory]

Mazhur, you are a poet, and I feel the pulse of poetry in your writings, of course to rank you with you some of my favorites. I have read many of yours in the course, yet this one proved to be pretty arduous, not that I disliked it.

It needs a fair introduction the way the Wasteland of T.S.Eliot needed.

I think there is something out of the ordinary you want to present and just a touch of forewords it will leave magic effects.

Notwithstanding its intricacy I envy you.