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tennistar
04-11-2008, 06:17 AM
Poem i wrote for my gf :)

Through the good times and bad,
I want u to know that ur the best friend i ever had,
through the misery and gloom
i always think of the good times in your room

Your smile and ur hug
And ur cute love for bugs
And the days thatve gone by Without me telling u a lie
Have made me realise one thing
that i want to be the one to give u the ring

Check this out. (http://www.informativepost.com/2008/04/08/Benitez-all-praise-for-his-young-Dutchman-609.htm)

ShadowFire
04-11-2008, 11:40 AM
Welcome to the site!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nice start. Ofcourse the most power is in the last line. It speaks volumes about how you feel inside. Keep up the work and thank you for sharing your poetry with us.

madem514
04-11-2008, 02:10 PM
aww very nice poem!!!

MidniteHowl
04-12-2008, 06:36 AM
Sweet! I like it.. I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to seeing more from u..