Running Away Into You

[njepsen]

This is my first post. I'm a musician, and this was something I wrote while writing a song. It speaks very loudly to me, which made me want to share it. please feel free to comment


Wrapped up in fear
entangled in this mess
trying to escape
I find myself running away into you.

[Auriga]

Very nice. I'm happy to see you up here. :D Welcome.

[ReynardKitsune]

wow. welcome and bon voyage!

[njepsen]

thanks *blush*

[forcedtobe]

i really like it, but i dont know why, just speaks to me i guess :)

[njepsen]

thank you forcedtobe. :)

[forcedtobe]

yep :)
it just seem so...i dont know..but its good..i cant realy explain how i connect to it but i do immensely

[kelby_lake]

i really like it :)

[njepsen]

Well, thank you. :)

[Anza]

excellent example of the beauty of brevity. Bene factum; well done!
10/10

[firefangled]

This is my first post. I'm a musician, and this was something I wrote while writing a song. It speaks very loudly to me, which made me want to share it. please feel free to comment



This needs some expansion and rearranging, but whatever you do, this is your song...all lines run into this excellent hook!


I find myself running away into you.

[njepsen]

Thanks for the imput :) It's very much appreciated.