Who Am I?

[Red_Rose]

Who Am I?
My face, is soft but sometimes dry
My name, short and very calm
My voice is soft but sometimes gets loud.
I my parents’ eyes, I am a good person who sometimes gets into trouble.
In my teachers’ voice, I am a no brainer.
I see myself succeeding in everything I do.
To my family, I am a talker and a drama queen without a movie to star in.
When with my friend, I am a good listener.
To strangers, I am smiling face in a crowd.
I am mature when it comes to babysitting.
When it comes to Halloween, I get all dressed up and beg for candy which to me I seem life a child.
I am smart my future for it is what I make of it.
I dream about a place were there is no danger, were people can live the American Dream.
One thing I will always remember is to take care of my sister, for she means that most to me.
I always forget to do my choirs, but somewhere along the line I get them done.
People don’t really understand my religion, my faith but I keep on trusting God.
When I think and when I am confused I like to be alone.
But who am I?
A friend to all,
A listener,
And
A follower of Christ.

[dibyendra]

I had read few of your earlier poems but this one is quite deep which captivated me till the end.

I guess the following lines can be omitted as they deviated from the topic. It's only a suggestion as I thought without these lines would make a sweet poem for me.


I dream about a place were there is no danger, were people can live the American Dream.
One thing I will always remember is to take care of my sister, for she means that most to me.

Nice theme and sweet poem Red_Rose. Thanks for sharing! :thumbs_up

[ReynardKitsune]

yea i agree i welcome you to be my friend :D you awesome to depict yourself in a poem which i find so hard to do so. its breathtaking :D

[Red_Rose]

thank you ReynardKitsune and dibyendra. I love the advice and the comments. With your help i am getting better