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lucidnightmares
04-06-2008, 10:04 PM
uncertainty caresses my mind
as thoughts drift through consciousness
and if i only knew why, i couldn`t find
why i can`t reach out and claim my bliss

my heart says yes
my mind is mute
as i digress
a trivial pursuit

lost in thoughts of what might be
dreading the past and all that was
too scared to act, there`s no guarantee
regardless of this i will try because...

i`m tired, you see
of being alone
so sick of me...
...i`ll find the unknown

asilef73
04-06-2008, 10:25 PM
i really enjoyed the rhythm of this one. nicely done.

ReynardKitsune
04-09-2008, 02:57 AM
yea. good job!