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birgitta_nell@y
04-06-2008, 11:35 AM
The Tidal Wave

Events happening
All at once like a tidal wave,
Crushing me,
And spinning me around in endless voids.
Intense pressure drowning me,
Pulling me backwards,
Into an ocean of chaos,
Pulling me away,
From the safe shores of existence.
Looming over me,
A black wall of icy reality,
And uncertainty,
Watery masses crashing down,
I cannot see the sun,
And its’ light of familiarity,
As I slowly slip away,
Into nothing.

lucidnightmares
04-06-2008, 09:41 PM
like the world is moving too fast, everything is a struggle and life is a cold shell of what it once was.
this is only my interpretation of it though, your way of describing reality is beautifully chilling.