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Red_Rose
04-04-2008, 05:11 PM
Words
Words unspoken,
Words unknown.
Words that are kept secret from the world.
A true story that indeed.
A story that is said to be a lie.
A heart broken face which tears run down.
A broken heart that screams.
Family and friends now worry,
And as they love her and try to comfort her
All this girl can do is try to find herself within.

ShadowFire
04-04-2008, 11:21 PM
Oh, cool very nice. I like it very much. Very moving as usual and yet unique. I like every line. Keep up the work. Thanks for sharing!

blazeofglory
04-05-2008, 10:16 PM
Words
Words unspoken,
Words unknown.
Words that are kept secret from the world.
A true story that indeed.
A story that is said to be a lie.
A heart broken face which tears run down.
A broken heart that screams.
Family and friends now worry,
And as they love her and try to comfort her
All this girl can do is try to find herself within.

Your words are rosy, blosooming and indeed they move all.

Red_Rose
06-20-2008, 07:16 PM
Thank you ShadowFire and blazeofglory for the comments. I love that people are actually liking my poetry.