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manny2
04-01-2008, 12:29 PM
Shattered in pieces,
Unable to repair,
Resting on the ground,
Sitting scattered.

Breaking more everyday,
by the sharp steps of others,
with no care in the world.

This heart lays,
open, hurt and cut;
like a broken mirror on the ground,
reflecting only pain
of the faces walking by.

symphony
04-01-2008, 12:48 PM
Did u mean "breaking" in stanza-2 line-1?
I like the last line very much. :thumbs_up

manny2
06-22-2008, 02:48 AM
Thank you! and thanks for the correction : )

goldenrod
06-22-2008, 11:10 AM
"reflecting only pain
of the faces walking by."

Shattered indeed!


goldenrod.