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[mahishi]

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[mahishi]

plz I WANNA KNOW YOU IDEAS? PLZ COMMENT

[white camellia]

Poetry in the form of visual art, very touching. I was impressed by the dialectics of the "intellect" and "serpent of love". They are very good and honest ideas. Maybe the words of the work can be further refined and this telling of those ideas could come with more images...

[John Gambitz]

Not to be influenced by love as love comes from within. Seek love in oneself is better than to seek love in others. Unless you are in love with yourself, you can't really love others. But then, its quite a poem you wrote there.

[white camellia]

Unless you are in love with yourself, you can't really love others.
I believe it's right. But I wonder why?

[Sweets America]

I found the ending a little abrupt, but the poem was interesting. It is strange how sometimes we repeat the same errors because the search or the need are too powerful.

Oh, about:


Unless you are in love with yourself, you can't really love others

I'm not sure it's always the case, because sometimes it's another person who teaches you to love yourself, because the other person sees you differently and shows you your qualities. This happens sometimes, one needs to be loved in order to love oneself.

[white camellia]

This happens sometimes, one needs to be loved in order to love oneself.
Indeed, for some...so that s/he can love the one better.

[mahishi]

Poetry in the form of visual art, very touching. I was impressed by the dialectics of the "intellect" and "serpent of love". They are very good and honest ideas. Maybe the words of the work can be further refined and this telling of those ideas could come with more images...


;) ;) Thanks for your comments,Through this poem I want to tell is that our intellect is disturbed by the love, not always ,but at least for a bit.;)
Don"t you think so?

[mahishi]

[QUOTE=Sweets America;555993]I found the ending a little abrupt, but the poem was interesting. It is strange how sometimes we repeat the same errors because the search or the need are too powerful.


Thanks for your comments;)

[mahishi]

Indeed, for some...so that s/he can love the one better.
yeh sure,

[Lonely_poet]

We are repeating the same pattern.
Over and over..