Moon

[Red_Rose]

Moon

Is the moon really evil in the sky?,
Which white clouds pass on by.
Is a round object which cant Hide
Myths say the moon brings out wolves and evil,
But I think it brings out a Hope.
A Hope so strong which can't be explained.
A Hope so powerful,
A Hope so strong,
A Hope that is never weak.
And that hope comes from
The One
The Only
GOD!!

[ShadowFire]

I like this poem very much Red Rose (and welcome to the website). My favorite part of it is probably the thoughts painted below:




Is a round object which cant Hide
Myths say the moon brings out wolves and evil,


Though you explain that the moon does not bring those out, I like the consepts. Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us and I look forward to see more of your poetry.

[Red_Rose]

Blood and Tears
A deep sorrow inside,
A thing that I can't describe.
Something so heavy on my chest,
Something I need to get off before I rest.
Sometimes I feel like people see right through me,
Like i don't exist.
Like I am a transparent thing on the move.
Something that always hurts.
A thing that can only feel pain inside
The pain she inflicts, is no pain at all
The blood and the tears she sheds is the only thing she knows anymore.

[spally]

wow, i like both peoms, they're great

[Pendragon]

May I extend a welcome to the forum myself. I like "Blood and Tears" the best of the two, although both show promise, the second builds better to its concluding line.
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[ShadowFire]

I love "Blood and Tears". Very nicely written. I like the last two lines the most, they made me pause to think about the true feelings behind it. And course I stared to feel the true emotions inside when I read this poem. It spoke to me. Thanks for posting it.

[Red_Rose]

Thank you everybody for your comments. This is my first and secound poems that i have writen and i am so glad that you like them