Call

[forcedtobe]

hey, i just started writing poems and i decided to come here to see if they were any good, my titles arent very good so if you have a better idea for a title or if you dont think my poem is no good, please let me know :)


I'm so scared to call...
I know he is too...
I'm so scared to fall...
I know he is too...

I'm so confused...
Not sure if he is...

I cant help but fear...
That i'll shed yet another tear...

That i'll mess up
That i'll get hurt

That I won't be able to stand up
That I will end up like dirt

See I'm afraid

I don't want to hurt him...
I know he wouldnt me...
But I feel like I'm at the rim...

Of already doing so....

[blazeofglory]

hey, i just started writing poems and i decided to come here to see if they were any good, my titles arent very good so if you have a better idea for a title or if you dont think my poem is no good, please let me know :)


I'm so scared to call...
I know he is too...
I'm so scared to fall...
I know he is too...

I'm so confused...
Not sure if he is...

I cant help but fear...
That i'll shed yet another tear...

That i'll mess up
That i'll get hurt

That I won't be able to stand up
That I will end up like dirt

See I'm afraid

I don't want to hurt him...
I know he wouldnt me...
But I feel like I'm at the rim...

Of already doing so....

There is indeed something to express deep and that is about what love.

[forcedtobe]

blaze

"There is indeed something to express deep and that is about what love."

sorry, but what do you mean?