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Helga
11-10-2004, 01:29 PM
I wish I was the ocean,
I wish I was the air,
I wish I was admired
or gave a scare.
If I could be longed for,
if I could be needed,
I would be there.

I wish I was like oxygen
or needed more than that.
I wish I was worth
the love I have.

Jay
11-11-2004, 08:00 PM
Can relate to most of your poem... actually it's the idea of being needed. If the rest of the poems I'm about to read is like this... goody, dark depressive stuff is what me likes *cheers*

Avalive
11-12-2004, 02:53 AM
I think it's pretty good--ur poem