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ahsiam
03-28-2008, 02:16 AM
you stand out of your walls
seeing a restless earth moving beside you
or the wind circling with the dust
but you stand there in rest
everyone runs
you wait for the storm to come
seeing the grass grow soft and bending together
you perched on the grass
and the storm begins
you wait for the mercy to come
but it doesnt
the time goes on as it will
you feel the cold
feel the wind trying to tear you from your root
but you hold on strong
trying to find yourself from your destruction.
the time goes on as it will
you find yourself at the end
and no one did.
cause its you who led a life of solitude
when everyone did.

symphony
04-01-2008, 12:40 AM
It's got to be my favorite from you (though i think i may change my mind once u finish that recent unfinished one...). I loved this except that i thought this could do better without some of the redundant parts like the bits with the storm, the holding on... But i love this. Love it.

ahsiam
04-01-2008, 07:08 AM
it just came on as i said you...
i just wrote it cause i wanted to give my feeling a shape...thanks.:)
you always make me special...