poet...

[ahsiam]

oh poet!
how do you write poems-
that has no limit of beauty
has no limit of melody...
or is it unworthy to say so?


how your words are quilled-
being a harmony,
with a boundless symphony
one after another, so great!...
or is it unworthy to say so?


how your feelings flow-
being exposed
being a secret
being a beauty against the twilight...
or is it unworthy to say so?


how your silence work-
absorbing me,
taking me in the grandeur age
where i seek happiness...
or is it unworthy to say so?


oh poet!
take me,lure me and make me
a slave of your silence
for a journey to unknown sphere,
a slave of your imagination
that brings spring in my timeless moments.

[symphony]

Its not, i think, the best but its good. I've seen better from u, but that doesnt make it bad. I didnt like the repetition much, but thats okay too. What i really really love about this one is that last stanza (not AGAIN! its becoming a litany now!), though i AM biased towards the second (boundless symphony? :brow: :p ).

[ahsiam]

Its not, i think, the best but its good. I've seen better from u, but that doesnt make it bad. I didnt like the repetition much, but thats okay too. What i really really love about this one is that last stanza (not AGAIN! its becoming a litany now!), though i AM biased towards the second (boundless symphony? :brow: :p ).

:( sorry for writing those words. didnt think of you.:lol:
yeh i told you. i myself didnt like it.
last stanza........not again...........