Thrust

[edenscancer]

Its not about sex, its about power
the slow lead into explosive murder
the sensual saccharine mind blowing

god crushing... ****

Its not about making love ... It's about taking love
about endless passion staring back at you because
they're so crushed and broken by the impact of the in satiated demon
this engraving on their soul
this thing that caters only to their sex
this ****
this whore, this monster, this love...

It's not about motion, It's about rhythm
the precision beat of adrenaline lust rush
the cataclysmic barrage of bare bodied bodies
slamming their truth into each others lies
cleaning the sin

its not about religion, it's about Jesus Christ
It's about making her forget his name

It's not about rape, it's about her having no choice

its about being inside to erase the begging sick in your head
erasing the scribbles of society enforced media suicide
with every thrust and push and break and bleed
It's not about insatiable want, It's about insanity's need

It's not about cumming, it's about being inside
it's about the walls giving in around you
because they can't handle the raucous ravage ride
Its' about god **** Jesus Christ heroine sup suicide
and about not caring if you live through it
as long as you cross to the other side

It's about the crash, and the burn
about ****ing so hard it hurts
about becoming one
about being one

it's not about me, or you
it's about creating one
from destroying two

[Sweets America]

I like the tone of this very much. It's raw. One can feel the strength of it. Oh, and the ending was good.

[PrinceMyshkin]

This is a stunning poem, or more than a poem - one soul's anguished cry!

[asilef73]

nicely done. the ending was excellent but i also enjoyed this part immensely:

its about being inside to erase the begging sick in your head
erasing the scribbles of society enforced media suicide
with every thrust and push and break and bleed
It's not about insatiable want, It's about insanity's need