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Miao
11-06-2004, 01:44 AM
Seas of wonder through the night
No one knows such silence might
Wave with torments in my mind
The sleepless power of awakened blind

Feelings cross from time to time
Slowly escaping from behind
Stoned cold tears sadly mine
Inescapable state of mind

Singing lonely one more time
In this timeless epoch of tonight
Tired to death awaked I am
Oh! Sleepless death of my foresight

Early morning makes me cry
Bloody tears, pain of mine
Shall this night pass by so slow?
While dreaming awake I am?

I shall never see that moon!
Oh!, much more I hate this room
As my black eyes melt helplessly
And my numb face begs, begs
For a Minute of peaceful sleep

Please, let the sleeping awake
Go away, let my dreams take place
Forgive the conscience of my sour face
Because there must be a way…
There must be a way…

Restless, tired, unloved I feel,
Unrecognizable laugh trying to appeal,
Let those old wounds heal,
Those that haunt my fears
Oh!...What a dream life is and
I still think is real




Sounds familiar?
is it understandable, i mean ... does it make sense?
Just tired right now...
comments more than welcome

Avalive
11-12-2004, 02:56 AM
Yea,I read it and you did well,yea...

Helga
11-28-2004, 03:04 PM
very good, I have trouble sleeping so I understand what your talking about.