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Jilla
11-05-2004, 05:01 PM
Dear readers;

Hi , I`m so glad because I can find such a useful and active site on the internet. I sometime write poem ,in English and in my own language . I have learned French 2 months ago I can speak a little French . I don`t know many word but I also wrote a poem in French . Is there anybody here who can help me in my French poem ?
I will be glad if I know your Opinion about this , I know it`s too short but it is a short poem :

Life is so long
but as you pass along
nothing will stay
Except your song

Thank you very much :wave:

Jester
11-05-2004, 06:03 PM
hi welcome to the forums, :wave:
your poem reminds me of that song by Kansas, (ithink it was kansas) "all we are is dust in the wind," similar... anyway I like your poem, its straight to the point, very direct yet thought provoking.
What's your native language?