ripples of consciousness

[lucidnightmares]

yay one hundredth post, so i guess i`ll just let my thoughts run wild
hopefully it`s worth it.:)

raindrops fall upon the lake
ripples fade into one other
will this be a moment i take?
or will it be forgotten,
lost in the empty corners of my mind?

i can`t help but wonder
when will i be lost?
will i be pulled under
or trapped within the frost?

it seems so perfect
a death so cold
pain to reflect
a story told

but this story is ending
much too soon
the sun descending
before i can bloom

for we are all flowers
a vision of perfection
ivy encases the towers
of our resurrection

for perfection is tainted
lies not spoken
castle walls built on them
will only be broken

within the ruins lies our fate
only to return to which we came
we are given the power to create
created sorrow, so sorrow we became

yet we resist
ours willingness to die
we choose to exist
dream to the sky...

[ShadowFire]

I love it. Well done and I like your flow of thought. I like the begining the best personally, especially the first three stanzas. The images are painted well and it has a touch of sadness mixed with truth. Yet the end has a dash of hope. Thank you for sharing.

[lucidnightmares]

thanks alot
i just through this one together, it took alittle while though