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Tarquin
03-13-2008, 01:12 PM
In a field of weeds
You are all I see
Blackness of Dispare
You may light my way

Rest me down in peace
Where you lay
Keep me safe
Away from them

Turn me from pain
Show me the way
Face me away
From the world today

Shelter me from their lies
Bring me warmth inside
Now lay me down in peace
In our field of weeds

ShadowFire
03-14-2008, 05:45 PM
This is a very interesting poem. I like it. You can really get the feeling of the poem. Thank you for sharing. My favorite part is the last stanza.

Tarquin
03-15-2008, 04:30 PM
thank you very much :)