to whom it may concern

[lucidnightmares]

can you feel it?
the beat of my heart
not exactly steady
hidden piece of art

and even though it`s hidden
it sometime will shine through
and all of my presence
unleashed to fall upon you

all of these feelings
all of my soul
cannot be contained
needs to be whole

so won`t you complete me?
would you give me a chance?
to show that i deserve you
we could start our own romance

but if you walk away
i guess i`ll understand
because your love is free
not something i command

freedom that makes you desirable
the fact that i can`t have you
makes me want you more
for this love is overdue

[Mutatis-Mutandis]

Pretty good. I usually don'y go for romance poems, but I think a girl would love recieving this from someone. Don't jump on me if it she doesn't though, the female mind eludes me. Then again, the poem gives no indication as to what the writer's sex is. If it is a female to a male, I would advise not giving him the poem and instead ahow some cleavage and smile at him. That will be much more effectice.

[lucidnightmares]

haha i`ll have to grow some mammary glands and try that:p
but yea i guess it`s for a girl, no one in particular, so i guess i`ll save it for now.

[ShadowFire]

I like this very much. I enjoy the begining espeacially the first three stanzas. I actually can apply this entire poem to my "love life" right now. But she has chosen .... and I am not the choice. But it is all well. Poetry really helps to release these feelings. I really like this poem and it is very speacial. I am glad I could relate it to my life.