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Tarquin
03-11-2008, 08:13 PM
Painting Reflections

Still sitting waters with stars painted on top, why are you so calm?
And yet my reflection is not
So muddled and dirty, like a smelly old swamp
the moonlight on your surface, like the carpet awaiting it's queen
I cannot go, I cannot be seen
Rain falls and splatters the face that looks up at me
And I can't help but see my painting awaiting me
The rain causes ripples
A minor imperfection
But thats what makes it so fair.
Underneath those lines
A future is awaiting me.

lucidnightmares
03-11-2008, 09:40 PM
suicide perhaps, well that`s just the feeling i get from it.
i may be wrong with my assumption, but i know this is beautiful.

Tarquin
03-11-2008, 10:12 PM
It is an indecision, the picture is death, but underneath everything is it wroth it to escape when eventually the ripples will end, and your future will open up to you. And thanks so much :)