Wedding

[aashishameya]

Innocence lost
Relationship fragile
Happiness shallow
Love useless
Divinity nowhere
Touches ugly
Kisses bitter
Time wasted
Wedding takes place

[ShadowFire]

I like this style of poetry. I made one similar to it. My favorite part is the line "Relationship fragile". Man, do I know that is true, so delicate. I also like how the poem is simple and to the point. You waste no time (excuse the pun from the poem) in getting out you point. Good job.

[dibyendra]

Innocence lost
Relationship fragile
Happiness shallow
Love useless
Divinity nowhere
Touches ugly
Kisses bitter
Time wasted
Wedding takes place

I loved that Aashy! It shows how one is being forced to marry to the one whom he/she doesn't prefer from the heart.

Last four lines moved me Aashy!


Touches ugly
Kisses bitter
Time wasted
Wedding takes place

:thumbs_up

[kiz_paws]

Aashishameya, I completely echo the words of Dibyendra. The poem was short and very to the point. I enjoyed it. :thumbs_up

[asilef73]

wow...nicely done.